Friday, 12 October 2012

Trifextra Week 37

This weekend they are challenging us to write 33 of our own words to build upon the following:
On the count of three...
We can choose to include those words if we want, but they do not count toward the 33 words of our own.

Anti-climax 
 
“On the count of three!” she cried.
I’ll be honest, it surprised me. I’m no Lothario, but I’ve had my share of pillow talk. Being ‘counted in’, though, was certainly a first.
And it quite spoiled the moment.
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14 comments:

  1. Draug12 October 2012 at 10:54

    lmfao awww

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  2. Unknown12 October 2012 at 11:41

    Too cute! Great job!

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  3. Anonymous12 October 2012 at 13:41

    Ha! That's hilarious.

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  4. LucidLotus12 October 2012 at 15:46

    Balls out awesome. What? Too obvi?

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  5. Unknown12 October 2012 at 16:55

    Haw haw haw

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  6. lumdog201212 October 2012 at 20:35

    Haha! Peformance on demand is always a drag. Nice.

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  7. Kimberly13 October 2012 at 19:00

    Clever use of a countdown. But maybe being counted in might be better than being counted out?

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  8. karen13 October 2012 at 21:27

    Heh ... that's very fun. Kind of a mood killer, though.

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  9. Trifecta14 October 2012 at 05:08

    I can imagine it would rather kill the moment.

    I know dialogue tags are meant to be passé, but "cried" is kind of perfect here. I've got the image of some crazy-ass warrior woman in my head.

    Thanks for linking up with us this weekend. It's nice to "see you" around these parts.

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  10. Anonymous14 October 2012 at 05:24

    I loved this. Made me laugh out loud. One of my favorites.

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