Friday, 12 October 2012

Trifextra Week 37

This weekend they are challenging us to write 33 of our own words to build upon the following:
On the count of three...
We can choose to include those words if we want, but they do not count toward the 33 words of our own.

Anti-climax 
 
“On the count of three!” she cried.
I’ll be honest, it surprised me. I’m no Lothario, but I’ve had my share of pillow talk. Being ‘counted in’, though, was certainly a first.
And it quite spoiled the moment.

15 comments:

  1. Balls out awesome. What? Too obvi?

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  2. Haha! Peformance on demand is always a drag. Nice.

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  3. Clever use of a countdown. But maybe being counted in might be better than being counted out?

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  4. Heh ... that's very fun. Kind of a mood killer, though.

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  5. I can imagine it would rather kill the moment.

    I know dialogue tags are meant to be passé, but "cried" is kind of perfect here. I've got the image of some crazy-ass warrior woman in my head.

    Thanks for linking up with us this weekend. It's nice to "see you" around these parts.

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  6. I loved this. Made me laugh out loud. One of my favorites.

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